WALT write a captivating recount.
Hear I hear crashing waves and yelling birds.
Smell I smell salty water and dead birds.
Taste I taste the hot steamy chips that I truly crave for.
Feel I feel sharp rocks and crunchy sand.
See I see flying birds and ice cream dribbling down my chin.
By Hemi.
So today I learned blog recounts. This was really cool but at the same time it was frustrating, but I cracked it in no time. What I really enjoyed was writing and how interesting this cool activity was. I hope you enjoyed these recount sentences thank you a lot for reading this.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Hemi it is Amber from Paihia School in Te Ngahere. I like your blog post about your blog recount you made. It had a lot of rhyming in your blog recount which made it even more interesting to read. It reminded me of when we were doing a activity like that. How long did it take to make the blog recount?
not long
DeleteKia ora Hemi it´s me Nikau from your class. I really like your recount it was very interesting. I enjoyed how you described what you heard and felt. Blog ya later.
ReplyDeleteHi Hemi it´s me Kedjron. I really like your recount. I like how you put the titles for the sentences so we know what you are talking about. Next time you could write more. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Hemi, my name is Anika and I go to Paihia School. I really liked you post about the captivating recount because you described the 5 senses. I have never done this type of writing before but if my class does it i will probably know what to do.
ReplyDeleteDid you enjoy this activity?
Kia ora Hemi it is Charlize from Paihia School. I really liked your blog post about Captivating Recount because it had really good vocabulary and lots of rhyming. I have never done this before but it was fun to see how to do it.
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